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MLP sketch C: E N D

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Sketch com for Gracyn
Thank you for commissioning me ! :)

Hope you like it
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2000x1400px 1.95 MB
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I love the color choice and use of lighting. Their is a nice sense of motion to the picture too and the character placement was a good choice also. I also noticed the picture seemed to have a certain dynamic to it.
Like your looking through a lens which is distorting the space around the edges slightly, if this was the intent my Id recommend creating a sort of rounding edge to the building on the left.
Another good idea to give a feeling of distance would be to make the (literal) foreground ground a bit less blurry and sharper. This will help give a sense of distance if you do that but keep the buildings in the distance blurry, it can also give the illusion of a haze.