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FlutterShy by AquaGalaxy FlutterShy by AquaGalaxy
too lazy for a creative title =.= Meep school is starting is I wanted to draw some more before things heat up. XD
enjoy the art. XD I know the foliage is lacking lots of detail but I am tired. I was looking at a child blowing bubbles today and inspecting them was lots of fun. So I drew some XD. I know I'm such a child. XP. I really messed up the lighting :iconcannotevenplz: HALPPP ME.
art (c) me
mlp (c) Hasbro
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:iconmrasianhappydude:
"Nice work and great attention to detail."
One of the first things I though of. The work definately has impact (stood out straight away). Love how you managed the lights on the bubbles.

I would say one of the best things about this work is the "fun" feel I get from it. (Bubbles at the park?) A cheerful and uplifting piece of work. I just can't get away from the light management. The reflections from the pond and bubbles are well done. Though you said that there was a lack of detail on the background/foliage I feel that you did a good job in the background.

Some things I think you could improve on would be the basic shapes of Fluttershy. I'm not sure if it is apart of your art style but the ears and eye shapes seemed a bit off. I was intially bugged by the nose shape but I got used to it.

Overall a very good piece of work.
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In a previous critique, I mentioned that this artist has a unique way with lighting and getting her best works to really shine. But I also believe that I warned them not to let it distract from the rest of the image. I can't help but find the sunlight shine a bit to overzealous on the artists behalf.

Now I understand that telling this artist that her work is too shiny would be like telling Mozart that his symphony has too many notes in it, but that's not exactly where my concern lies. My biggest criticism lies with how the quality seems to drop in the density of the bright light. The artist mentioned that some of her foliage may have been lacking in quality or detail, but direct your attention to where the light is coming from, the top right. Whereas the foliage (not to mention the lake behind her) would have made a nice canvas for the incredible detail given to Fluttershy's design, to the left we have what appear to be several blots of white out. It can't be easy to use whites against a bright glare, but that little archway seems rushed and sloppy. I also would have liked a little more time spent on the fence. The foliage, water, and bubbles, all look great as far as I'm concerned.

In fact, I really ought to say that much like most of your artwork, the colors and shades all look stunning. I still can't get over how you did her hair and how beautiful you can make the eyes. All in all, it is a very beautiful piece. There were but a couple little things that caught my attention and brought the overall quality down just a little.

On one final note, and I really don't want to sound like an ass,
but bright lights and glares shouldn't be used to cover up or hide detail, they should accentuate them.

Cheers,
--Michael
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rainbowrules Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Love the mane and the eyes
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AmazingCrayon Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my gosh, I just love her hair! <3 It's so detailed and beautiful. I like the bubbles a lot, too. I do think there could be more detail in the background, it is kind of underwhelming (especially compared to the way Fluttershy is drawn!), but this is still great overall. :) I love how cheerful the whole idea of it is. Great job!
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MLPegasis4898 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is just wonderful!!! Love it so much!!! :heart: :love: :heart:
The background, her mane, eyes, shadings... everything!!! :aww: :aww: :aww:
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MarcellaD20 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Student Filmographer
aw
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Tinkerjazz13 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she's soo cute! Love 
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
thanks!
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Tinkerjazz13 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome!
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MasterVule Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This should be painted on celling of some chapel or something like that... absolutely beautiful!
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
XD thanks
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piopenix Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
 :iconcannotevenplz:    :iconcannotevenplz:     :iconcannotevenplz:      :iconcannotevenplz:  (X_X)
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
>w<
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piopenix Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful ^^
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:iconzaiali:
zaiali Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013
Everything is so shiny! 
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
Thanks  ^^
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rachphil Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you surez liek dem bubbles o3o also YOU DID NOT MESS UP TEH LIGHTSING! IT'SH FINEEEEEE and yes i know how bubbles can be (even i play eith them sometime.. //shot) 
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
XDDDD thanks ^^
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1bookfish Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, so many people saying it's beautiful... I'll look for another word to use... *goes to thesaurus* 
Magnificent!! Yes, that works wonderfully!! 
This is absolutely magnificent!! Incredible job, really!! :D 
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks XD
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JustAnotherOneUser Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013   Artist
wow...
this is amazing!
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:iconaquagalaxy:
AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
c:
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FeanorKelsick Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
lovely background, very pretty
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
>w<
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NyTxVzziN Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student
Omg... ... ... Off the meter amazingness-ess
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:iconaquagalaxy:
AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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NyTxVzziN Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student
no problem :D
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DeJiKo07 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
Beautiful!
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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Dragonstar1278 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
Beautiful.
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
c:
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Al-Rey-Writer Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Professional Writer
That is the most beautiful thing I've ever seeeeeennnn!! :iconexplosionplz:
It more than makes up for the lack of creativity in the title :p
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
*u* thanks ^^
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michellethecat13 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
Wow. Just simply amazing!

Fluttershy looks unbelievable!
I love everything on this!
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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noobymaniac Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
wow this great!
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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WolfenV Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
Awesome!
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
>w<
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Dashermkii Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GOSH DANG i am so jelly of your skills. Anyways you said you wanted critique I will try to help you with that.

The hair is Amazing 
the colors are amazing.
 I love the bubbles. the mood is great. and the anatomy it pretty much spot on. 
The few problems that i do see is that the fence seems very 2-D and the feathers seem a bit off.
I don't think the lighting is bad just a bit bit crazy in fact I kinda like it.

Please keep up the great art work! I love it!

"I REALLY LIKE HER MANE!"
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
XDDD thank you so much for your words
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Maggie-X-Awesomeness Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is seriously nice
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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lola4232 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very realistic! I love the background that you put her in, along with the bubbles floating by. I also admire her flowing hair and beautiful wings. There's nothing wrong with your lighting, but the shading on Fluttershy here makes her look quite pink in a way. That's about my only complaint with this. Other than that, this artwork is wonderful. :aww:
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks ^^
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lola4232 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No probbie! c:
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Biscuit-Rawr Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
So beautiful~ I love the lighting~ Along with her mane and that pond <3
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
thanks !
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XLUFERX Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Is very beautiful. That hair  is very realistic.
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AquaGalaxy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013
>w<
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HiroMorisato Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Student Filmographer
awwwww
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